Wednesday, April 15, 2009

Pirate run away

"Get out the way!" said the pirate, as he tumbled over the waterfall slamming into the water yelling at a high note said there is leches in the water!!He jumped out and braking his nose while hitting the ground.The pirate ran to the forest and while running into a rope trap pulling him up said sadly this is the worsed day ever.
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  1. Our School TeacherApril 15, 2009 at 8:02 PM

    Mario this is really good. Let's go back and edit it for punctuation in class. Good job.

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